Nature's Beauty

October 20, 2009
Bark glistens from burnt sun,
Leaves as green as dewy morning grass,
Nature's beauty will last forever.





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Tenthmuse said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 9:31 am
Haikus are supposed to be set up 5-7-5 syllables. This one is 6-10-9. But it's still an okay poem!
 
WintersRevenge replied...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 11:52 pm
I think she got confused as to whether it was 5-7-5 syllables or words.
 
sasssgirrrl22 said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 4:34 pm
nice. very creative
 
ranciana said...
Oct. 30, 2009 at 10:12 am
cool beanes
 
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