They spin, they flitter
Colors blur into ribbons
As the leaves are blown
Colors blur into ribbons
As the leaves are blown
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
Leaves
ChrisJ
Very nice and creative, good job! I know everyone says this, but will you please check out some of my haikus too?!
I love the detailed image that forms in my mind when I read this poem. This was beautiful, great writing!
pandagirl312
I love the imagery and picture. :) Good jobs to both Elizabeth and Alice on their fantastic work. :)
girly21
MiaUnwritenI like this poem a lot!! Keep up the good work!
dreamxentertaini like this haiku; it's very picturesque.
Twinny said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:02 pm:
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:02 pm:
I like this haiku alot...it created great imagery&&i love how the picture fits perfectly.!:)
WaterGirl23i love this! it's so simple but yet reallly elagantly written :] good job!
great poem verry creative i like the way i can visualise exactly what your talking about keep it up dont stop writing!
BleedingRoseI love it! It gives me such a cool picture in my head, and it flows wonderfully. Great job!
Would you mind checking out some of my work? Thx!
-Rose
jpv41193Absolutely love it!!
Lanier42short and sweet. but all hiakus are short :) great job :D
That was really great! It's amazing how much meaning you put into so little words. :)
I love all the detail you include in just a couple words. Clearly, your imagery is really really strong.
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