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They spin, they flitter
Colors blur into ribbons
As the leaves are blown

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Laugh_Live_WriteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 31 at 10:13 pm
This is beautiful! Excellent imagery. I love it!
 
nomistooThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 31 at 2:19 pm
I love the ribbon bit. Great imagery!
 
ChrisJThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 22, 2013 at 1:35 pm
Very nice and creative, good job! I know everyone says this, but will you please check out some of my haikus too?!
 
vballgirl99 said...
Sept. 24, 2012 at 8:04 pm
I love the detailed image that forms in my mind when I read this poem. This was beautiful, great writing!
 
pandagirl312 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 6, 2012 at 10:26 am
I love the imagery and picture. :) Good jobs to both Elizabeth and Alice on their fantastic work. :)
 
girly21 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 23, 2012 at 12:22 am
beautiful poem!
check out mine too?
 
MiaUnwriten said...
Mar. 10, 2012 at 2:53 pm
Beautiful, just beautiful
 
emsolsen said...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 6:13 pm
I like this poem a lot!! Keep up the good work!
 
dreamxentertain This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 11:07 am
i like this haiku; it's very picturesque.
 
god was here said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 1:33 pm
this poem is both simple but beautiful
 
Twinny said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:02 pm
I like this haiku alot...it created great imagery&&i love how the picture fits perfectly.!:)
 
WaterGirl23 said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 12:49 pm
i love this! it's so simple but yet reallly elagantly written :] good job!
 
Lilybean17 said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:46 pm
Love the photo :D
 
ctowle said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 6:01 pm
great poem verry creative i like the way i can visualise exactly what your talking about keep it up dont stop writing!
 
Rell23 said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 11:21 am
Simple but sweet
 
BleedingRose said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 9:55 am

I love it!  It gives me such a cool picture in my head, and it flows wonderfully.  Great job!

Would you mind checking out some of my work?  Thx!

-Rose

 
jpv41193 said...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 8:32 pm
Absolutely love it!!
 
Lanier42 replied...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 3:08 pm
short and sweet. but all hiakus are short :) great job :D
 
Lanier42 replied...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 3:08 pm
oops. not supposed to be a reply
 
morgan12196 said...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 10:01 am
VERY CREATIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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