Will it calm again?

September 13, 2009
By Tybalt SILVER, Coral Springs, Florida
Tybalt SILVER, Coral Springs, Florida
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The water Ripples
Its reflection is blemished
It will calm again

A mirror shatters
Its reflectoin is destroyed
It won't calm again

A life changes course
Its reflection confusing
will it calm again?



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hairy said...
on Sep. 13 2016 at 6:53 pm
hairy,
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every word you say makes sense it's a great poem even though in my opinion i would make it longer but then that would be overdoing it :)))

on Feb. 23 2013 at 9:50 am
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1143 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

WOW that's sublime!.. I love the depth. Amazing Haiku....Maybe check out some of mine?

Marvinn GOLD said...
on Oct. 24 2012 at 11:48 am
Marvinn GOLD, Cannon Beach, Oregon
10 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I’m glad we had the times together just to laugh and sing a song, seems like we just got started and then before you know it, the times we had together were gone."- dr. suess

This is so beautiful it applies to so many aspects of life.

on Jun. 17 2012 at 11:46 am
HeatherOlivia GOLD, Solothurn, Other
16 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All things truly wicked start from innocence." - Ernest Hemingway

I think I've read this five times now! i keep coming back to it. It's so original! Please write more haikus like this! I just liek reading them :)

on May. 1 2012 at 7:52 am
BlackCloudsLover SILVER, Waterford, Wisconsin
9 articles 4 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am imagination. I can see what the eyes cannot see. I can hear what the ears cannot hear. I can feel what the heart cannot feel."

Not a lot said but so much meaning! I loved all of the verses and rhythm. Great Haiku!(:

on Jul. 20 2011 at 4:52 pm
DinosoarJen DIAMOND, Scottsville, New York
86 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just another casualty.
It's sad but true.
And even dead I'm still ahead
of most of you.

So few words but so much meaning!

Wow i can totally relate. You're very talented. Maybe you can check out my stuff sometime? I would appreciate it! Keep up the good work!!

 

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on Jul. 20 2011 at 9:35 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." - Michelangelo
"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am." - Sylvia Plath

oooooooh LOVE THIS ONE!!!! simple words with the most powerful meaning ever!!! Makes one think a looot... Keep writing! :) (and check out my poems)

on Apr. 6 2011 at 12:44 pm
very good haiku,good use of personification.powerful words.

2goldenR said...
on Apr. 1 2011 at 9:57 pm
2goldenR, Cortlandt Manor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“Power tends to corrupt. Absolute power corrupts absolutly."
—Unknown

Great imagry and wording. I loved it <3

on Mar. 10 2011 at 9:29 am
Alex_Durham GOLD, Vineland, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 234 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

awww so cute

spiria BRONZE said...
on Dec. 28 2010 at 12:13 am
spiria BRONZE, Fullerton, California
3 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Beautiful. Deep. Touches my heart.

I really hope it will calm again. :)


on Oct. 29 2010 at 8:55 am
the_real_reggie_rocket BRONZE, Spostylvania, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I like to move it, move it."-Anonymous

This whole poem had great imagery!! This is probably one of the best haikus I had ever read. At first, it seemed like every other haiku I read on here, but then I reflected on it and tried to understand the real meaning. Great Job. :)

on Aug. 24 2010 at 5:11 pm
tenth_muse GOLD, Wheaton, Illinois
10 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"well, you know, we all want to change the world." -the beatles, "revolution"

love the mirror imagery. 

 

check out my work please!!


on Aug. 24 2010 at 8:01 am
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
Worry is simply a misuse of the imagination.

this is really cool. really makes you think. sort of philosophical. i would love it if you could take a look at some of my work. thanks!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 9:08 pm
kiranwhy BRONZE, -, Other
1 article 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast to dreams
For when dreams go
Life is a barren field
Frozen with snow
(Langston Hughes)

Beautiful.....

on Jun. 23 2010 at 3:17 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Great job - this poem is strong and makes you think about how you look at things, like the water or mirror. Keep it up, and check out my stuff?

on May. 29 2010 at 4:53 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

beautiful. itz so deep. i luv it!

on May. 27 2010 at 8:04 pm
Kathleenmarie BRONZE, Sturgeon Lake, Minnesota
2 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We are the music makers, We are the dreamers of dreams" - Willie Wonka

Beautiful! I Love It:]

Id like to think we are like the water in your poem. The ripples on top will calm but the rock that made them leaves an impression in the sand underneath.


on May. 12 2010 at 8:07 pm
Ninten1992 PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forgive and Forget".

Beautifully written!

on May. 7 2010 at 2:31 pm
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
27 articles 8 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

Awww... I sure hope it calms again.

Great poem... really touching, speaks to me, and makes me want to read it again and again.

Think up endless possibilies of what it could me. So many different perspectives could be taken... philosophical, maybe?



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