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My feet hit the snow as
I walk, the wind blows, homeless
Through trees and my heart

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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KeishaLouise15 said...
Nov. 8, 2012 at 7:33 pm:
short  but  pretty  
 
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KeishaLouise15 said...
Nov. 8, 2012 at 7:33 pm:
short but pretty  
 
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Blaine W. said...
Nov. 8, 2012 at 4:02 pm:
I really like this poem. It is written very well. Great job!
 
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gabbru said...
May 16, 2012 at 8:08 am:
I liked this Haiku. It was very dark but very pretty at the same time. It all fit together very well. Nice job!(:
 
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Fia-fia said...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 11:21 am:

awww this is kinda sad but sweet. Thank you

:)

 
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XpaintmeablueskyX said...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 10:59 am:
i love it :)
 
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dia.dreamer said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 10:17 pm:
as everyone else already said, the wind being homeless is just awesome. I loved this haiku...keep writing...and check my poems out too. :)
 
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redhairCatThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 3:14 pm:
Could you look at my haiku poems Doubt, All Alone, and Seeing Your Soul, please? Thank you!
 
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Libra97 said...
Apr. 21, 2011 at 6:08 am:
This is a fantastic poem!  Homeless wind is genius.
 
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hungergames said...
Apr. 16, 2011 at 6:37 pm:
I love the way that you reffered to the wind as homeless, it's great
 
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DreamInspired said...
Aug. 17, 2010 at 9:40 am:
I really liked the idea of homeless wind. An area for improvement would be to remove the as in the first line. With the as it is not the correct format for a haiku. The last line was worded beautifully. Great job.
 
pickle*eater replied...
Dec. 5, 2010 at 6:35 pm :
i realy lik the idea but haikus r soupesed to be 5,7,5 and u hav 6,7,5 sysabless other than that its good
 
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Ninten1992 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 12:57 pm:
Good poem. I really like the second line. :)
 
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JustaPerson said...
May 21, 2010 at 10:11 am:
wow....your good, but yeah remove the as.
 
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Snookums said...
May 21, 2010 at 9:59 am:
ur poem l00k g00d.
 
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izzib1202 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 6:45 pm:
i love the idea of homeless wind, it really sets the mood for the rest of the poem. amazing.
 
ellie315 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 17, 2010 at 10:22 pm :
most definatley agreed. you are a beautiful writer!!!
 
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s.peverell said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 4:06 pm:
I like how you described the wind as homeless. the simplicity was very nice and I feel it captured a walk in the woods, as you effectively described feeling part of the forest (wind blowing through trees and your heart)
 
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Lilly101 said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 9:07 am:
Hey I really like your hikku needs more work but its really good!! keep up the good work! :)
 
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DeadlyPoppy said...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 12:56 am:
It was good, but I don't understand why you don't just eliminate the word as. It is your writing though, and it was a good poem.
 
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