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Like the church bell ring loudy
My heart burst sounds
for you only my heart beats
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gravinggino226 said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 1:57 pm
great but I agree its not to much of a haiku
 
dia.dreamer said...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 8:25 am
I really like it as a poem, but as many others pointed out, it's not a haiku. if it was, I'd rate it 5 stars! :D
 
MSTie said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 11:03 am
Not your typical Haiku. =<)
 
Ke$ha said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 11:02 am
Very good topic but I dont see how it is a haiku it has to many syllables
 
DiamondsIntheGrass This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 6:24 pm
its really nice, and really sweet, but its not a haiku.  the first line is supposed to be 5 syllables, the next 7, and the last 5.
 
halls said...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 2:22 pm
omg i luv this. its increadable
 
Sw33t_M3cA replied...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 4:11 pm
thnx appreciate it....
 
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