Like the Church Bells

September 9, 2009
By Sw33t_M3cA BRONZE, Virgin Islands, Other
Sw33t_M3cA BRONZE, Virgin Islands, Other
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Irregular people are only irregular because regular is out-dated" " Make Moments, Last Be Exciting"


Like the church bell ring loudy
My heart burst sounds
for you only my heart beats
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The author's comments:
Kinda new at this....

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on Jan. 9 2012 at 1:57 pm
great but I agree its not to much of a haiku

on Aug. 22 2011 at 8:25 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
10 articles 0 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." - Michelangelo
"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am." - Sylvia Plath

I really like it as a poem, but as many others pointed out, it's not a haiku. if it was, I'd rate it 5 stars! :D

MSTie said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 11:03 am
Not your typical Haiku. =<)

Ke$ha said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 11:02 am
Very good topic but I dont see how it is a haiku it has to many syllables

on Oct. 4 2010 at 6:24 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
Worry is simply a misuse of the imagination.

its really nice, and really sweet, but its not a haiku.  the first line is supposed to be 5 syllables, the next 7, and the last 5.

on Oct. 4 2009 at 4:11 pm
Sw33t_M3cA BRONZE, Virgin Islands, Other
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Irregular people are only irregular because regular is out-dated" " Make Moments, Last Be Exciting"

thnx appreciate it....

halls said...
on Sep. 26 2009 at 2:22 pm
omg i luv this. its increadable


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