Love Poem

September 9, 2009
By Anonymous

She loves him,
And he loves her,
Their love is never a mix,
It is but a stir.

They look good together,
They are a perfect couple,
They are each othershalf,That means they are double.

The love they hold for each other,
Might not ever end,
Which mean their love,
Will only extend.

Caring for each other,
Is the most important thing,
We all know how much they care,
So we know it's not a fling.

They love each other,
They really do,
All they say,
Is I Love You.


The author's comments:
Mii poem is dealing about love.

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hairy said...
on Sep. 13 2016 at 6:41 pm
hairy,
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it may sound forced but one thing i do know is that it is a great poem with truth and rythm

on Jan. 18 2015 at 1:19 pm
bastillewriter BRONZE, New Albany, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
We write to taste life twice; in the moment and in retrospect.
-Anais Nin

I don't like this poem. The rhymes seem forced and there are no surprises. Also, the whole "true love" thing isn't that easy in real life, honey. Don't criticize me for sharing my opinion.

on Sep. 13 2014 at 9:43 pm
dgeileen PLATINUM, Livingston, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
“To live is the rarest thing in the world. Most people exist, that is all.”
― Oscar Wilde

I love this line: 'Their love is never a mix, It is but a stir."

DestinyR. said...
on Oct. 7 2013 at 11:13 am
DestinyR., MANCHESTER, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"live for today not tomorrow."

idon't either  

DestinyR. said...
on Oct. 7 2013 at 11:13 am
DestinyR., MANCHESTER, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"live for today not tomorrow."

i don't either

on Aug. 19 2013 at 12:45 pm
nelehjr DIAMOND, Lingle, Wyoming
60 articles 11 photos 381 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Um...I don't think that was a hiaku...

on Sep. 27 2012 at 6:26 pm
Misfit95 PLATINUM, Dover, Ohio
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Lovely, touching, and eloquent. I love this poem; I would like to check out more of your work, but you posted as "anonymous"....Oh, well; just keep writing! Don't let a talent such as yours slip away.

on Sep. 5 2012 at 9:54 pm
Purple_Plumberry GOLD, Imperial, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"On the stage he was natural, simple, affecting. Twas only that when he was off, he was acting." -Oliver Goldsmith

I was thinking the same thing. This poem doesn't follow the 5, 7, 5 syllable rule. Still an interesting love poem.

Ranea GOLD said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 7:57 pm
Ranea GOLD, Elkhart, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"It can always be worse, so put on a happy face and laugh!" (my own quote) &
"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words may scar my soul."

iment love not live--- sorry

Ranea GOLD said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 7:56 pm
Ranea GOLD, Elkhart, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"It can always be worse, so put on a happy face and laugh!" (my own quote) &
"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words may scar my soul."

i loved it!!!!!!!!!! i really connected with it and wish all live was more like that, but oh well. keep up the great work and keep writing

on Feb. 1 2012 at 3:41 pm
Doves_and_Ravens SILVER, Orlando, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"It is not in the stars that hold our destiny, but in ourselves."

-William Shakespeare

This really made me feel like had just read Shakespeare but I could understand it. Lovely work. Please, keep writing!

on Oct. 11 2011 at 6:03 pm
gottagetout17 SILVER, Carlisle, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"No matter what anybody tells you words and ideas can change the world" ~Dead Poets Society

love it! it's just...great! :)

Amberocks:) said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 4:51 pm
just because u dont have love doesnt mean you have to ruin love for every1 else

LuVR GuRl said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 4:48 pm
well sweety love doesn't exist but i respect of the fact that u believe in it.

Amberocks:) said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 4:44 pm

this is a cute story

it is true to

the cutest part is

the "I LOVE YOU"


on Oct. 11 2011 at 11:23 am
A_Braden BRONZE, Glendale, Arizona
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Great poem, only thing i have to say is keep writing and make any poem you do a little longer.

on Sep. 19 2011 at 6:07 pm
LovingTheHaters, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
my mind loves you but my heart doesnt
never say never because it will end up coming to reality
the same thing that makes you laugh will make you cry

when i read your poem i just fell in love with it...I REALLY LIKE IT!!!!!!

on Aug. 21 2011 at 3:00 pm
Makaila. SILVER, Mondamin, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
No one has more fun than crazy people!

I love it! It reminds me of my mother and soon-to-be father. No, not remind. It is the perfect discription! Thank you and keep writing. 

on Jun. 1 2011 at 7:29 pm
Studio_Riet GOLD, Tonasket, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
" Times you see, is a little arrangement that man has made for himself to try to measure the immeasurable mysteries of life." -Calypso to Ulysses (Bernard Evslin.)
"You don't have a soul, you are a soul. You have a body" - CS Lewis

Or free verse, 'cause it doesn't completely follow any specific rules. It is good, though. Just needs work for a haiku.

on Jun. 1 2011 at 6:25 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil." - unknown author.
"All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream." - Edgar Allan Poe

very cute and sweet:)


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