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Summer Days in Texas

A dirt lot out back,
Old trash can as first base,
An old wore out ball.

Hitting the ball hard,
Rabbits run across the field,
Dirt in my face.

The day passes fast,
Sun begins to set,
We all race home.




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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 6:36 pm:
wow this is so descriptive and well writtten!! awesome job- i feel like i'm in it!! great job -i really like this!! please check out my Haiko: True love is when! i appreciate all comments!! i love ur poem1!
 
Periwinkleid replied...
Nov. 7, 2011 at 4:43 pm :

I agree, but it's not a haiku...

 

 
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