Train Robbers

September 8, 2009
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It was filled with wealth
The speeding train rushed back to town
Dark clouds filled the air

Shady looking outlaws appeared ahead
Their loaded guns showed they meant business
Squealing brakes pierced the air

Robbers stormed through the train
The men looted what they pleased
Silhouettes raced to the sunset





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un_namedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 3:13 am
I love this, it's really well written. The syllable pattern isn't a haiku but other than that its great
 
Alyssa(: said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 5:56 pm
I like the beggining but in the 2nd paragraph it starts to loose you. i still like it though!
 
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