Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Angels Angels By Zero_K, moosic, PA More by this author Angels cannot fly for long With broken feathers This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 14 comments. Post your own! Report abuse dina8 said... Nov. 16, 2013 at 2:52 pm: Love the message that was portrayed in only three lines, great poem! Report abuse micky3232 said... Sept. 24, 2013 at 12:42 pm: i think this is really amazing i love writing haikus myself :) keep writing :) Report abuse TheSkyOwesMeRain said... Feb. 14, 2013 at 11:19 pm: Wonderful, I love it! Report abuse KnitsandPurls said... Sept. 1, 2012 at 1:31 pm: Wow. That's all I can say. <closes gaping jaw with hand> Report abuse Norma-Bernard said... Apr. 23, 2011 at 4:40 pm: Hahaha idk u but we both live in moosic! Anywho, this is FANTASTIC! i <3 your work! please check out mine! 5 stars all the way. Keep it up! Report abuse baby girl said... Nov. 2, 2010 at 12:03 pm: i like that saying Report abuse Thesilentraven said... Sept. 29, 2010 at 7:56 pm: A very interesting piece... It's very beautiful although it appears to be so simple. I like the obvious way that this is stated "everybody knows..." I find it strange but creative that you chose to say broken feathers instead of wings. Report abuse Inkspired said... Aug. 11, 2009 at 8:00 pm: love this. haiku are so difficult. I've done a few but haven't put them on here. really, though, every word means something. well done!! Report abuse Electricity said... Aug. 11, 2009 at 7:14 pm: lol, lol, i saw my one of my favorite short stories that you wrote on the HOME PAGE!! I'm not sure if they pick ones that are the most popular, but when I saw THE MIRROR under fiction on the HOME PAGE, I was like GASP!! I know this one, i know this one! Over excitement... I guess I really like THE MIRROR because I really relate to it. And, yeah. when I saw how many comments I posted under THE MIRROR, I kinda felt I had too many... so yeah... Report abuse SaraB. said... Aug. 11, 2009 at 12:53 pm: Wow that was really amazing. I try haiku, but it never gets that deep. Really well done. (Thanks for the comment!) Report abuse emo.panda101 said... Aug. 9, 2009 at 4:31 pm: great job Report abuse hcosmob said... Aug. 9, 2009 at 4:10 pm: this is so great. amazinggggg Report abuse Little2Feet said... Aug. 7, 2009 at 12:27 pm: Aw, I love it! My grandmother is always saying stuff like this about angels and heaven. Great job! Report abuse Electricity said... Aug. 6, 2009 at 9:25 pm: this makes me wonder if angels could go to God and get new wings... okok, i'm going to everything you have written and reading it.