Everybody knows
Angels cannot fly for long
With broken feathers
Angels cannot fly for long
With broken feathers
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
TheSkyOwesMeRain
KnitsandPurlsWow. That's all I can say. <closes gaping jaw with hand>
Norma-BernardHahaha idk u but we both live in moosic! Anywho, this is FANTASTIC! i <3 your work! please check out mine! 5 stars all the way. Keep it up!
Thesilentraven
A very interesting piece... It's very beautiful although it appears to be so simple. I like the obvious way that this is stated "everybody knows..." I find it strange but creative that you chose to say broken feathers instead of wings.
Inkspiredlove this. haiku are so difficult. I've done a few but haven't put them on here.
really, though, every word means something. well done!!
really, though, every word means something. well done!!
Electricitylol, lol, i saw my one of my favorite short stories that you wrote on the HOME PAGE!! I'm not sure if they pick ones that are the most popular, but when I saw THE MIRROR under fiction on the HOME PAGE, I was like GASP!! I know this one, i know this one! Over excitement... I guess I really like THE MIRROR because I really relate to it. And, yeah. when I saw how many comments I posted under THE MIRROR, I kinda felt I had too many... so yeah...
SaraB.Wow that was really amazing. I try haiku, but it never gets that deep. Really well done. (Thanks for the comment!)
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Little2FeetAw, I love it! My grandmother is always saying stuff like this about angels and heaven. Great job!
this makes me wonder if angels could go to God and get new wings... okok, i'm going to everything you have written and reading it.
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