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March 2, 2018
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His eyes follow the soft rain
D
O
  W
   N
Struggling for help…
trying to be born into a new light
but the war inside is prowling
like a lion on the hunt.

Clashing with worldviews trying to BREAK OUT

Be different

Be BOLD

Be Wild

As the rain comes
the world beating you
D
O
  W
   N
With a whip telling you to
conform

Staring into the corners of the world
Trying to find something within yourself
S  k  i  p  p  i  n  g  out on lame dances
slowly DYING inside

Not feeling the        of life...
                      high
 






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Invisiblefsngirl2018 said...
today at 10:00 pm
I told you! You are an amazing writer! You should listen to your best friend more often...
 
AEwriter said...
Mar. 3 at 7:56 pm
I really like this poem. Especially the difference in CaSeS and s p a c i n g in certain words. Good job.
 
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