February 26, 2018

On the surface the water is nice

To step in and swim would cost you no price

But when you step in, you feel a sharp pull

It comes from the water that seemed gentle and cool

The rippling liquid pulls you down under

Is everything how it appears?

It's this that I wonder

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Aurapoetry1This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 2:28 pm
Thank you! @BriannaKemberly @Kyleah0906
BriannaKemberly This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
yesterday at 6:07 pm
I love the word choice.
Kyleah0906 said...
Mar. 5 at 12:47 pm
I love this such a good message!
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