gone is my heart

November 16, 2017
By , Lemont, IL

Gone is a family member
Gone is a loved one
Gone is a friend
And gone with this friend
Is my heart
And where it used to be
A black hole in my chest
That has no cure
Gone is a family member
Gone is a loved one
Gone is a friend
And with them they take my heart






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peaches71113 said...
today at 12:21 pm
Wow! This is truly amazing.
 
far-out said...
yesterday at 9:53 am
The repetition of the poem is really strong.
 
caldeeth000 said...
yesterday at 9:53 am
I really like how connected the author was to this friend. It is like without them they feel empty inside.
 
calhochr000 said...
yesterday at 9:53 am
This poem moves me. A black hole in my chest is a really strong line in the poem. The poem creates such a sad mood on the readers. The poem makes the reader feel bad for the author.
 
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