gone is my heart

November 16, 2017
By Anonymous

Gone is a family member
Gone is a loved one
Gone is a friend
And gone with this friend
Is my heart
And where it used to be
A black hole in my chest
That has no cure
Gone is a family member
Gone is a loved one
Gone is a friend
And with them they take my heart



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on Dec. 14 2017 at 12:21 pm
peaches71113 BRONZE, Lemont, Illinois
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Wow! This is truly amazing.

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on Dec. 13 2017 at 9:53 am
far-out BRONZE, Lemont , Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm with you til the end of the line."

The repetition of the poem is really strong.

caldeeth000 said...
on Dec. 13 2017 at 9:53 am
caldeeth000,
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I really like how connected the author was to this friend. It is like without them they feel empty inside.

calhochr000 said...
on Dec. 13 2017 at 9:53 am
calhochr000,
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This poem moves me. A black hole in my chest is a really strong line in the poem. The poem creates such a sad mood on the readers. The poem makes the reader feel bad for the author.


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