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The Captive

August 25, 2017
By GouriAsnani BRONZE, Bhopal, Other
GouriAsnani BRONZE, Bhopal, Other
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The water is calling me
I am struggling with the traps
The world's held me captive
And the reality slaps
No soul’s now left
Just metal, heavy metal
All robots, living the aimless aim
To dream, lose and settle.
Each a precipitate
To the elixir of life
And the bubbles who’d float
Subjected to knife…
None dare to float
Fearing the death afar
And thus is left unfelt
That cool, blissful shower
The earthly ones
Too scared to rise
Hold back him
Who tries the thrice...
People, the ultimate judges
Their chatters foremost
Those meanest words
Which matter the most
The rat race triumphs
The passions abjured
All fail to live
Survival’s conserved…
I fail to understand
This eclectic place
There's so much of space
Yet no solace
The deep, dark seas call me
Where nothing's a truth or lie
Where I needn't breathe or swim
And where I need not try...


The author's comments:

Today, everyone is struggling hard to earn a living. Though ironically, no one is living, just surviving. Because of saturation in every field, in every career, that latent talent fails to attain light or attention. Thus because everyone is busy getting that job, assurance, etc., no one feels satisfied in what he's doing as he isn't doing what he loves and can excel in. 


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on Aug. 30 2017 at 5:58 am
Beautiful Gouri! Great going.. Keep writing and posting!!

on Aug. 30 2017 at 5:01 am
GouriAsnani BRONZE, Bhopal, Other
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments
Thank u mam!

on Aug. 30 2017 at 5:01 am
GouriAsnani BRONZE, Bhopal, Other
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments
Thank u mam!

Anju said...
on Aug. 29 2017 at 10:01 pm
Very well and nicely written. Keep it up

Anju said...
on Aug. 29 2017 at 10:01 pm
Very well and nicely written. Keep it up

on Aug. 29 2017 at 2:06 pm
GouriAsnani BRONZE, Bhopal, Other
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments
Love u alll. I'll surely write more. Thanks so so much for such beautifying words for my poem

on Aug. 29 2017 at 2:06 pm
GouriAsnani BRONZE, Bhopal, Other
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments
Love u alll. I'll surely write more. Thanks so so much for such beautifying words for my poem

Isha said...
on Aug. 29 2017 at 1:32 pm
Ya it's very much true. I can feel it rather i am feeling the same thing. Nowadays people are living just to survive on earth , no feelings , no emotions , no happiness. Gouri ur way of expressing the things is fabulous and I liked the poem very much .

on Aug. 29 2017 at 12:57 pm
Ananya Prasad,
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Superb!!you go gouri!!!

on Aug. 29 2017 at 12:57 pm
Ananya Prasad,
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Superb!!you go gouri!!!

on Aug. 29 2017 at 12:57 pm
Ananya Prasad,
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Superb!!you go gouri!!!

Inspiration said...
on Aug. 29 2017 at 12:34 pm
Amazing work. Need more.

Shubhra said...
on Aug. 29 2017 at 12:02 pm
Gouri u r soooo brilliant
The deep meaning of ur poems touches right here ❤

Umang said...
on Aug. 29 2017 at 11:21 am
Talented girl !!!

Umang said...
on Aug. 29 2017 at 11:21 am
Talented girl !!!

Ashita said...
on Aug. 29 2017 at 10:30 am
Gauri the way you have described the scenario today and how we are leading our lives is really commendable. Way to go girl !

on Aug. 29 2017 at 9:37 am
GouriAsnani BRONZE, Bhopal, Other
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Thanxz ishita

Ishita said...
on Aug. 29 2017 at 9:35 am
Aweosme!!!! Loved it!!!