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Behind Closed Eyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I can remember watching the hourglass
Grains falling
Following one another
It asked me what I was searching for
I just sighed, turned it over and watched it run out again

Behind closed eyes
One cannot see the fate of high spirits
Burning and crashing
A lonely vapor appearing
Sad phoenix rising from the ashes of life

I can remember listening to music to calm my busy mind
Because rainy days keep coming and clouding up my thoughts

And in the nighttime
I stand under the tree branches
The falling water chills to the blood, the muscles, the bones

Behind closed eyes
One cannot see the fate of high spirits
Burning and crashing
A lonely vapor appearing
Sad phoenix rising from the ashes of life

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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sunnyhunny This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 17, 2010 at 5:07 pm:
Very, very good.  Love it!
 
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Invaild_Kt said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 7:07 pm:
That was really good. :)
 
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iMeowTao said...
Mar. 7, 2010 at 5:27 pm:
If you've ever heard of the band Incubus... this reminded me of them for some reason. (And I utterly /love/ Incubus, so kudos!) ^ ^
 
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MyFairyTaleEnding said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 10:41 am:
This is REALLY good. No...AWESOME!!! This is actually the first piece of work I have read on here that has potential. I love this and please don't EVER give up on writing! Promise! :D
 
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LimitlessDreamer said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 8:25 am:
I really liked this one. I could feel what your were trying to get through to me. That was amazing(:
 
once_a_redhead replied...
May 31, 2010 at 7:02 am :
i agree with limitless dreamer babe it was awesome and deep!!
 
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Jimmy_flash said...
Dec. 26, 2009 at 10:47 pm:
great poem i really enjoyed it
 
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LimitlessDreamer said...
Dec. 26, 2009 at 5:38 pm:
wow...that was amazing....really good job...
 
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jesskillsyou This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 5, 2009 at 12:10 am:
I am such a huge fan...
 
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Fredwardness said...
Nov. 25, 2009 at 6:48 pm:
man sunny, you are a really good poet =)
 
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:)MissLady(: said...
Nov. 22, 2009 at 12:35 am:
B-E-A-utiful!
 
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KiraKiraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 6:17 pm:
This is absoloutley beautiful.
 
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Lucy4himnotu said...
Aug. 23, 2009 at 1:19 am:
perfectly worded. Wonderful :)
 
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musicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 20, 2009 at 5:39 pm:
i really like this alot. keep it up:)
 
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Tears2RosesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 10, 2009 at 3:20 am:
very nicely writen!!!
 
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UNICEF_Jr. said...
Jul. 30, 2009 at 9:19 pm:
Very nice work. Keep it up.
 
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MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 26, 2009 at 2:01 am:
i loved it u r talented :)
 
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Melinda L. said...
Jul. 24, 2009 at 1:27 am:
That was amazing. I can really relate to this and I loved your word choice. great job!!
 
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