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Lost In The Breeze

April 29, 2017
By BrunetteInsights SILVER, Caldwell, Idaho
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I try to hold on
But my thoughts are an umbrella
Turned inside out against the wind

I pull with all my might
But the air has memorized
My fight and knows
That I am nothing

While it's truly that easy to lose your grip,
One more gust and you'll lose your mind.

© Emmie B., Caldwell, ID

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BrunetteInsights SILVER said...
on Jun. 1 2017 at 5:43 pm
BrunetteInsights SILVER, Caldwell, Idaho
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@kissthemoon Thankyou very much for your feedback! I appreciate it more than you could know! :)
kissthemoon said...
on May. 28 2017 at 10:56 pm
kissthemoon, Miami Beach, Florida
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I love the depth and meaning behind this seemingly short poem... keep on writing!