Lost In The Breeze

I try to hold on
But my thoughts are an umbrella
Turned inside out against the wind

I pull with all my might
But the air has memorized
My fight and knows
That I am nothing

While it's truly that easy to lose your grip,
One more gust and you'll lose your mind.





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kissthemoonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 28 at 10:56 pm
I love the depth and meaning behind this seemingly short poem... keep on writing!
 
BrunetteInsights replied...
Jun. 1 at 5:43 pm
@kissthemoon Thankyou very much for your feedback! I appreciate it more than you could know! :)
 
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