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Give me a paper
To press into poetry
Ink to stain my skin

Give me a pen
To turn me immortal
Or toss my work
Before I win


 




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NimWallaceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 9 at 9:42 pm
Haha I didn't do that on purpose, though I love haiku ;) thanks!
 
hwoodruff98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 9:45 pm
Of course. I think the last word of the second stanza would make more sense if you replaced it with "begin," though :)
 
hwoodruff98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 9 at 4:29 pm
Nice piece. The first stanza is actually a lovely little haiku. Were you aware of this? ;)
 
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