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Stardust

March 23, 2017
By itis_rebecca BRONZE, New City, New York
itis_rebecca BRONZE, New City, New York
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So much depends
Upon

A wish that comes
True

I wish on a
Star

And crumble like star
Dust
 


The author's comments:

A/N: This piece was inspired by "The Red Wheelbarrow" by William Carlos, and the stanzas are shaped to look like the Big Dipper.


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on Mar. 25 2017 at 10:34 pm
HereSheIs BRONZE, Wellesley, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"We can easily forgive a child who is afraid of the dark; the real tragedy of life is when men are afraid of the light." -Plato

That was amazing. You packed so much…stuff…into 8 lines. And it has the same simple yet perfect imagery of "Thr Red Wheelbarrow"