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Memories

March 18, 2017
By WordsToChangeANation GOLD, Lebanon, Ohio
WordsToChangeANation GOLD, Lebanon, Ohio
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An old white house

Sits on the corner:

Roof drooping,

Walls crumbling,

Windows shattering.

 

Some windows

are covered with 

moldy wood,

as if 

to try and protect

the people inside

from the world.

 

The grass

is dry and brown

and littered

with faded:

bikes

toys

clothes

balls.

 

The house creaks

and moans

as if remebering

the good days: 

filled with:

sun

children

laughter

fun..... and

life.

 

The house screams

and moans

and sloooooooowly 

slooooooooowly

breaks 

           d

                0

                     w

                            n

under the weight

of the happy

memories.



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on May. 9 2018 at 4:52 pm
singingintherain BRONZE, Lebanon, Ohio
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I like your writing style and descriptions!! cool poem

on Aug. 1 2017 at 1:35 pm
WordsToChangeANation GOLD, Lebanon, Ohio
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thank you! @never-tire-of-doing-write @SpeakerofWolves

on Aug. 1 2017 at 12:05 pm
never-tire-of-doing-write BRONZE, Concordia, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"don't ask yourself what the world needs. Ask yourself what makes you come alive and go do that because what the world needs is people who have come alive."-Howard Thurman

That's a cool way of writing. Using the words and the format of writing them to add to the emotional impact of the story is cool. Glad to see you're trying out that style. Keep it up!

on Mar. 30 2017 at 4:42 pm
WolfWhisperer0911 BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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Wow, awesome job! Love the idea of memories!!!