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Under the water

with nothing to judge me but the lapping of the waves against cement

I felt beautiful






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SpeakerofWolvesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 31 at 7:55 pm
@-pancake- OMG, this is so amazing! I went to Splashtown two weeks ago and this poem wraps up what I felt about going underwater. Keep up the amazing work!
 
reach4marsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 30 at 12:14 pm
Well thank you for your truth, it's a beautiful truth :) (simple, yet elegant piece! Great work!)
 
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