March 14, 2017
By -Pancake- SILVER, Grants Pass, Oregon
-Pancake- SILVER, Grants Pass, Oregon
7 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Bullies drink loser juice" Gerard freaking way

Under the water

with nothing to judge me but the lapping of the waves against cement

I felt beautiful

The author's comments:

Just some truth.

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on May. 31 2017 at 7:55 pm
WolfWhisperer0911 PLATINUM, Crosby, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"For I command you, be brave and steadfast! For the Lord your God will be with you whenever you go."
-Joshua 1:9

"Throw me to the wolves, and I'll return leading the pack."- Unknown

"Never moon a werewolf." -Mike Binder

@-pancake- OMG, this is so amazing! I went to Splashtown two weeks ago and this poem wraps up what I felt about going underwater. Keep up the amazing work!

on May. 30 2017 at 12:14 pm
reach4mars PLATINUM, State College, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
I already know how it ends, I'm just here for the ride :)

Well thank you for your truth, it's a beautiful truth :) (simple, yet elegant piece! Great work!)


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