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yelling, sounds like help
scream
scream ends
yelling sounds like I got you
yelling sounds like let go, let go
yelling sounds like hands, let me see
yelling sounds like no, help, let go, help
nothing for a second
scream
scream ends
yelling sounds like assistance
yelling is indiscernible
yelling sounds like stay down please stay down please help
yelling sounds like let go
scream
scream ends
yelling sounds like gun
yelling is indiscernible
gunshot
yelling sounds like oh my god oh god help
yelling sounds like I got you
yelling sounds like oh god
yelling sounds like stay still
yelling is indiscernible
scream
scream ends






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writergymnast14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 25 at 5:57 pm
Well done! You are extremely talented.
 
Gabbs said...
Mar. 23 at 8:36 pm
Great work! You have so much talent!
 
IamRogueThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 23 at 1:51 pm
It's got a powerful meaning,very enjoyable and I like how your words flow with what you try to say.
 
Idpina said...
Mar. 23 at 3:22 am
Great read
 
C-Los said...
Mar. 23 at 2:48 am
Very powerful message and the repetition is amazing
 
Cole N said...
Mar. 22 at 8:33 pm
Sweet stuff
 
Eatnyuh said...
Mar. 22 at 6:52 pm
Extremely Powerful and the repetition makes this poem really stand out!
 
Jariiiiiiii said...
Mar. 22 at 5:09 pm
AMAZING!!!!!!
 
Alice said...
Mar. 22 at 4:59 pm
Efficient and powerful use of repition and a great poem in general!
 
Valentina said...
Mar. 22 at 3:41 pm
Very original style to convey a powerful story!
 
Savannah.WThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 22 at 1:51 pm
Nicely written
 
jstarobin said...
Mar. 22 at 1:31 pm
Interesting idea and really nicely done!!!
 
Neah_Cardine said...
Mar. 22 at 11:01 am
I like it. You've got such a good talent I hope to see more of it! Try writing something for the anvil one day!
 
Yuji.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 21 at 10:46 pm
this is gud, keep it coming! your use of repetition put me off a little at first, but I found that the more I read the more effective it got. keep up the good work, I expect to read a lot more good stuff!
 
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