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Chained To The Bond Of Love

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Eyes closed.
Screaming mind.
You can't run.
You can't hide.

Soft touch.
Gripping hands.
Stuck on a
different land.

Breathless.
Beating heart.
Butterflies.
Can't part.

Light kisses.
Rough touch.
Holding close.
My crutch.

Eyes open.
Smile wide.
Can't leave
my side.

You're mine.
Forever yours.
Don't worry.
Love sores.

You and me
Always and forever

Chained to the bond of love.






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tigerlilyorangeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 12 at 7:59 pm
This is terrific!! a few comments as you asked: If you say smile wide instead of smiling wide the syllables will match up better. in the second to last stanza, if you said something about love's sores instead of soars, it would connect the toe idea of crutch chain being being something you are telling someone not to worry about. Also, I think the ending is not as strong as the rest of the poem, maybe because it is all one sentence instead of the short statements previous. overall though it is ve... (more »)
 
JJ_LoneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 14 at 10:37 am
Thank you so much :D
 
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