Where Does Everyone Go?

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Why doesn't anyone come to stay?


in what way does it empower you


to watch me, watch you leave with


melancholy in my eyes




fear in my tears?

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Camomile_Addison said...
Jan. 29 at 6:38 pm
I absolutely love this line: "Why doesn't anyone come to stay?" That was so touching, and right off the bat, too. Describing them as "empowered" as they leave gives the idea that they like hurting people, and that's so weighted and heartbreaking. Ya got me good, Luka ;D
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