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Why doesn't anyone come to stay?

 

in what way does it empower you

 

to watch me, watch you leave with

 

melancholy in my eyes

 

and

 

fear in my tears?




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Camomile_AddisonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 6:38 pm
I absolutely love this line: "Why doesn't anyone come to stay?" That was so touching, and right off the bat, too. Describing them as "empowered" as they leave gives the idea that they like hurting people, and that's so weighted and heartbreaking. Ya got me good, Luka ;D
 
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