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You haven’t thought in a while, have you?

 

How do you think I know?

 

What's the next thing that's gonna happen in my life?

 

We may never know. 

 

We may know in three seconds.

 

And now we know. 

 

Now that's in the past.

 

Do you remember that?

 

I miss that...

 

I miss the past.

 

Can't we go back?

 

Really,

 

can't we go back?

 

We're gonna go back, aren't we?

 

We're going back.

 

i'm with you!

 

I like thinking about the past.






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Camomile_Addison said...
Jan. 29 at 7:36 pm
The title is almost like a command, but by the end of the poem, it's revealed almost like an invitation ("i'm with you!"). The nostalgia mixed with the recognition of how time flies by gives your words a heavy feeling. The line "I miss the past" is weightier, more sober and solemn in tone, especially after the line "We may know in three seconds." I really like this poem. ;D
 
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