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This ocean,
Was at a time a beautiful thing to swim in,
A place where one could feel calm,
And at peace,
A place where one could forget all those miseries,
And lie in serenity,
But in between everything,
Something went wrong,
Terribly wrong,
And the ocean was polluted with fears,
With loss and shattered dreams,
It screamed for it to stop,
It stung deeply and once you step inside,
There’s no coming out,
As it shallows you whole,
And you drown within,
This ocean became deserted,
It became despised and hated,
So it decided to end its life,
And asked the sun to dry it up whole,
And asked the rain to stop,
Feeding it with raindrops,
But those deep dark waters,
Became light with the warmth of the sun,
And the fresh droplets of rain,
Dissolved the pain,
And do you know dear,
The ocean became beautiful again.
 




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aw.izThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 3:16 pm
Love it so much.
 
NoushieRocks replied...
today at 3:27 pm
Thank you! I really appreciate it :)
 
Stifling_DarknessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 1:00 am
Pretty. Dark... But pretty
 
NoushieRocks replied...
today at 1:06 am
Thank you :)
 
Chewu said...
yesterday at 7:14 pm
i loved it. When I started reading it I was thinking the ocean isn't always beautiful. thanks for liking "Color" btw. You have bright future ahead of you ^-^
 
NoushieRocks replied...
today at 12:45 am
Thank you! :)
 
Chewu replied...
today at 9:42 pm
welcome ^-^
 
Sen77 said...
yesterday at 1:21 pm
Great just speechless
 
NoushieRocks replied...
yesterday at 2:25 pm
Thank you so much! :)
 
HammadWaseemThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
yesterday at 11:10 am
Nice poem, good job. @NoushieRocks Will you check and comment on my teen ink work named,"The Unbeatable Breakdancer"? :)
 
NoushieRocks replied...
yesterday at 11:11 am
Thank you! Sure :)
 
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