Broken

July 26, 2016
By missfloetry SILVER, Forest Park, Illinois
missfloetry SILVER, Forest Park, Illinois
7 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't mistake my kindness for weakness. I am kind to everyone, but when someone is unkind to me, weak is not what you are going to remember about me."
-Al Capone, American Gangster


When this first started,
It really didn’t matter,
But when I look into
The mirror I see a face that’s shattered.
Used to be a talkative girl,
But now I don’t chatter.
You wanted my good spirit,
And now you have her.
You broke me,
And now you’re gonna pay for it.
You hurt me,
And you don’t even know it.
I have feelings too,
Even though I might not show them.
I got a story,
And I wrote it in a poem.
I think about you all day,
It hurts me inside.
How would you feel if you were burned alive?
How I feel is betrayed.
You get to go on and have good days.
Time will pass,
But memories will last.
You knew I was fragile like glass.
I’ll never forget all the things that we had.
I saw your true colors and I’m glad.



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on Aug. 12 2016 at 11:12 am
missfloetry SILVER, Forest Park, Illinois
7 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't mistake my kindness for weakness. I am kind to everyone, but when someone is unkind to me, weak is not what you are going to remember about me."
-Al Capone, American Gangster

I appreciate your feedback Gagax!

Gagax SILVER said...
on Aug. 12 2016 at 7:55 am
Gagax SILVER, Sugarland, Texas
5 articles 1 photo 46 comments
OH MY GOD! this is hauntingly beautiful and such a good capture of ur feelings its so gooooood!!

on Aug. 5 2016 at 5:23 pm
missfloetry SILVER, Forest Park, Illinois
7 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't mistake my kindness for weakness. I am kind to everyone, but when someone is unkind to me, weak is not what you are going to remember about me."
-Al Capone, American Gangster

Thank you!

on Aug. 5 2016 at 6:48 am
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
23 articles 3 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
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Time will pass, / But memories will last. It messed up the formatting, but at least it posted it this time.... :)

on Aug. 5 2016 at 6:47 am
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
23 articles 3 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
eARTh

I wanted to tell you what my favorite parts were, but it deleted that part of my comment... ??\ You wanted my good spirit, And now you have her. You broke me, And now you’re gonna pay for it. You hurt me, And you don’t even know it.

on Aug. 5 2016 at 6:45 am
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
23 articles 3 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
eARTh

Favorite of your pieces! Beautifully sad...




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