When I Look At You

July 19, 2016
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When you can't stop thinking
On what seem to be endless nights.
The hopeless thought
Of us together just breaks me apart.
Even though the silence persists,
I can see it in your gaze
That this heartbreak might even be worth it.






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Jul. 26, 2016 at 3:45 pm
this is great piece, but it is not a ballad. this should be classified as a free verse poem. xx
 
IA246 replied...
Jul. 26, 2016 at 4:19 pm
Thank you @socialkaysualty I will change it.
 
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