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His very touch,

Was enough to give me ecstasy

As I felt the blood rushing in my artery.

The looks he casted from his blood blue eyes,

Was probably enough to light me up inside.

His tongue,

Chanting over three words.

Telling me he'll love me forever.

Ah! Innocent he!

Doesn't know that in this world

Even LIFE is temporary. :)




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Warrior1799This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 29 at 12:17 pm
This is so good...and so very true in a girls mindset, too.
 
LuminaryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 6:54 am
Thanks a lot :D
 
SohamThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 26 at 12:40 pm
Nice..... one
 
LuminaryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 28 at 11:44 am
Thanks dude. :)
 
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