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Sunflower

March 17, 2016
By CoolLee BRONZE, Muskegon, Michigan
CoolLee BRONZE, Muskegon, Michigan
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She waits.
She wanders when he is coming.
Mourning from night to dawn,
She waits.

Suddenly, his shine hits her arm.
She raises her head,
glad to see him.
She follows wherever he goes
He makes her heart warm.

He goes away again.
But she knows he’ll come back.
So, she waits.



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Wannabe said...
on Mar. 22 2016 at 10:28 am
this is amazing. Made me cry!

guest said...
on Mar. 21 2016 at 7:41 pm
That was beautiful. It reminded me of the Greek myth of Eurydice, later Echo, and Narcissus. Where you thinking of them when you wrote this?

Warley GOLD said...
on Mar. 21 2016 at 3:28 pm
Warley GOLD, LONG ISLAND CITY, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to show the world who you really are.

I was seaching for great free verse poems for my poetry class and this is just a perfect! I love the flow of it especially !!

on Mar. 21 2016 at 3:16 pm
Oli.Treadwell SILVER, Enterprise, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most." - Mark Twain

Good job, I love this! I would give you a million gold star stickers because honestly Sunflowers are my favorite flowers because they are long and lanky like me so I appreciate you writing a whole lovely poem about my favorite flower. Once again, thank you for your contribution to this lovely website. Have an amazing day you magnificent human being.