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February 25, 2009
By Beau Wright BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
Beau Wright BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
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Time will reveal everything I want to know now.
I wish time was just the name of a street.
I’d drive a black car up and down time.
I’d be happy.



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on Jun. 19 2011 at 8:05 pm
raidersrock08 GOLD, Hillsborough, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"positive attituide bring positive results"

that was! great

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on May. 26 2011 at 12:11 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

So true! :)

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on May. 6 2011 at 9:35 pm
Cubster BRONZE, Lindstrom, Minnesota
3 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may be on the right track but you'll get run over if you just sit there."

Yeah, you had a really good choice of words.

on May. 6 2011 at 9:49 am
A.PaigeTurner, San Antonio, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 125 comments

Favorite Quote:
You think that everybody hates you. You should really stop that.- A Good Friend

You got your meaning stated in just one verse!  I wish I could do that.

on Apr. 14 2011 at 9:46 pm
that was brilliant in so few words! really talented!

ilyjb said...
on Apr. 14 2011 at 7:44 pm
i love this it bright tears to my eyes and my brothers

on Apr. 14 2011 at 6:18 pm
ShyWriting42 BRONZE, Mesquite, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure...We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? You are a child of God."

Love the poem! but maybe if you talked about why it would make you happy in the last line it would flow better.

on Apr. 14 2011 at 11:04 am
ShirleyB BRONZE, Cork, Other
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Success Evolves From Belief

very pretty :) you'v a clever mind :)

on Apr. 14 2011 at 9:49 am
paperandpen SILVER, Hutchinson, Minnesota
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Men go abroad to wonder at the heights of mountains, at the huge waves of the sea, at the long courses of the rivers, at the vast compass of the ocean, at the circular motions of the stars, and they pass by themselves without wondering. St. Augustine

wow, what a great picture of your imagination!

 


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on Apr. 14 2011 at 9:49 am
gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
17 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

this is really good i love it it makes you tghink. dont listont o people who dnt like it. i love it

on Mar. 23 2011 at 8:30 pm
sedentarysteve, Middletown, Connecticut
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i feel like it's a bit redundant.  simple poems seem to sit with me much more smoothly than a longer one but i feel like this poem is lacking feeling.  the first two lines i felt were setting me up for a beautiful metaphor or introducing me to your message.  the third line kind of threw me off a bit.  i think it would have been more interesting for me to see as a reader, something more along the lines of what names you would've picked or metaphorically traveling down the road revisiting something.  i like the idea a lot but i feel it needs some tweaking.

Hotaru said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 3:27 pm
I think the ending of your poem needs more work. It seems a little weak. But other than that your poem seems to carry a lot of meaning in it.

on Mar. 23 2011 at 11:02 am
PerfectMGymnast DIAMOND, Parker, Colorado
57 articles 25 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't leap you'lll never know what it's like to fly"

So simple yet so beautiful!! :)

nancyyy BRONZE said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 7:26 am
nancyyy BRONZE, Spotsylvania, Virginia
2 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The bigger the dreams, the smaller the competition"

Although this poem is short it is very thought provoking. I like the whole idea of time in the poem and how simply you put the words to be understood by many people.

on Mar. 1 2011 at 5:51 pm
NicoleS PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
22 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
If someone thinks that love and peace is a cliche that must have been left behind in the Sixties, that's his problem. Love and peace are eternal.
- John Lennon

great poem! it's simple and short, but very poignant and powerful! loved it

on Mar. 1 2011 at 3:23 pm
mcnwritingsoul SILVER, Fairfield, Connecticut
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They can't scare me, if I scare them first." -Lady Gaga
&
"I remember watching the mascara tears flood the ivories and I thought, "It's OK to be sad." I've been trained to love my darkness." -Lady Gaga

Can someone plzzz comment on my poems...im desperate for feedback!

on Mar. 1 2011 at 3:22 pm
mcnwritingsoul SILVER, Fairfield, Connecticut
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They can't scare me, if I scare them first." -Lady Gaga
&
"I remember watching the mascara tears flood the ivories and I thought, "It's OK to be sad." I've been trained to love my darkness." -Lady Gaga

 Can someone pllzzzzzzzz comment on my poems!!

on Mar. 1 2011 at 3:21 pm
mcnwritingsoul SILVER, Fairfield, Connecticut
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They can't scare me, if I scare them first." -Lady Gaga
&
"I remember watching the mascara tears flood the ivories and I thought, "It's OK to be sad." I've been trained to love my darkness." -Lady Gaga

It doesnt have much power. I wasn't shell shocked or stunned at the end.....you should work on the ending. This poem is very good, yet it also has great potential!!!! 8)

on Mar. 1 2011 at 1:50 pm
EmilyMichelle PLATINUM, Manassas, Virginia
33 articles 4 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our truest responsibility to the irrationality of the world is to paint or sing or write, for only in such response do we find the truth."
- Madeleine L'Engle

This is a great poem! Short, sweet, simple, and to the point. Great job!

on Mar. 1 2011 at 1:20 pm
pleese make more sence


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