Party Problems

November 16, 2015
By maejw BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
maejw BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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A few teenage girls go to a party
Their parents let them drink
But when the boys show up
the party starts to stink

It’s your Sweet 16 and everyone is preparing for a hangover
little do they know-their lives could've been over
drinking vodka out the bottle
leads to broken promises

Friends tell the girls to stop drinking and run
But it’s too late, the cops already got the gun
The girls are laying on the ground and start crying
The boys are in the car and they start driving

The girls didn't think the party could go wrong
but then again- they didn’t plan on staying that long
Y’all get put in the car
and at first no one noticed the bars

The cops say “make a call”
and all I wanna do is cry and fall
Calling my mom to wake her up
and it wasn’t too pretty when she showed up

I’m in the car getting yelled at
neither one of us knew it would end like that
Worried to death my mom will kill me
I’m just glad she loved me enough to come get me



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