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October 27, 2015
By Athelas BRONZE, Ashland, Oregon
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you don’t smile
(she says)
even when you’re happy.
well, you smile
(she explains)
but it doesn’t hit your eyes.
talk to me
(she begs)
i’m worried.
and oh
dearest
i would if i knew how.

© Arianna J., Temecula, CA

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"It does not matter how slow you go so long as you do not stop"
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Wow, such a great poem! It has an awesome flow, and I like how you use the parentheses in a very creative way. Good job! :)