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Do You Think The Ocean Gets Lonely? MAG

October 6, 2015
By GPCee BRONZE, Hanceville, Alabama
GPCee BRONZE, Hanceville, Alabama
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Do you think the ocean gets lonely? Do you think she would welcome me with caring arms if I dived into her floating waves? If she would carry me down to her core and offer me shelter in her bottom shore? Would I find peace in the wide, open, curious space? Loneliness filling my lungs til I can no longer breathe. Would the creatures of the sea give me a proper farewell and let everything return to vast emptiness once more? Would others join me when they feel lonely? Would they offer themselves to the salty breeze and warm chills? Their final memories be of limited clouds of bubbles as their final breath leaves and loneliness takes over. Do you think the ocean gets lonely?


The author's comments:

I was actually staring at the ocean when I started feeling very lonely, so I picked up a pen and paper and put my feelings into a Poem.


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kissthemoon said...
on Apr. 23 2017 at 3:43 pm
kissthemoon, Miami Beach, Florida
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wow this is so powerfully written, and such an original idea. Keep on writing!