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The Painter

September 15, 2015
By Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
71 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.

All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.


With lead and wood, a plain sheet and mind
The Painter starts to work,
Applying the instrument to his canvas
Creating circles, lines, and curves
And using the right amount of thought
The canvas reveals a newborn child
Sleeping in the arms of a mother
But the Painter thought it could be more

The Painter extends to a new sheet
Ready to attack with wooden instruments
With each utensil applying a new color
He makes his canvas flourish and shine
With the aid of red, blue, and yellow
Now shows the image of a child
Surrounded with imagination and wonder
But the painter thought it could be more

 

The Painter removes his wooden masters
And finds friendship with a brush
Which dips into the dark lake of ink
He delicately apply more effort
Into the details of his new canvas
Presenting not quite a man but similar
Looking at the world with ideas and lust
But the Painter thought it could be more

Knowing this shall be his best creation
The Painter turns to his new idea, paint
A mixture of ink and color in a bowl
He creates vibrant colors and beauty
Along with courageous potential
Flourishes a man with fame and pride
Loved by everyone, inspiring to all
But the Painter thought it could be more

The Painter questioned his works
His style needs a new direction
Distributing a blend of chalk and paint
He creates odd figures, in shape and style
Streaming with all colors and variants
The canvas appeals to the man growing
Now representing intelligence and wisdom
But the Painter thought it could be more

The Painter accused himself, justified,
It must be a simpler style, not complex
Reaching back for his wooden utensils
Passionately, he creates with awareness
Applying more detail than ever before
He reveals an old man sitting in a chair
Expressing to children his wisdom and love
But the Painter thought it could be more

Now the Painter is angry, no furious
His frustration grew intensely with no control
He yelled, screamed, and shouted
He started to tear his canvas, rip his sheets
He destroyed his instruments of beauty
And with one final look at his canvas
At what seems to be the old man pleading
The Painter knew it could be no more


The author's comments:

This is actually my first poem. When thinking about starting, I wanted to create something that flows creatively, making me think of a painter drwaings. From this, I wanted to expand on this, thinking of how Life grows up along with the man so I made the painter draw six stages of a man.


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Saturn. BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2015 at 10:35 pm
Saturn. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
3 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The mind is better than the sword"
-Unknown (I'm too lazy to look it up)
"All warfare is based on deception"
-Sun Tzu

Nevermind... So why don't you check out what I have posted tell me what you think. (Writer's Workshop: VP, Character Feedback, Or Forever Alone.)

Saturn. BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2015 at 10:31 pm
Saturn. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
3 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The mind is better than the sword"
-Unknown (I'm too lazy to look it up)
"All warfare is based on deception"
-Sun Tzu

... Poetry MUST be your best article of writing, you turn everything that we plainly see into something better. (PS I read your newest one, that is dark and amazing) Do me a favor and ask CNBono about what I have posted.

on Dec. 9 2015 at 12:40 am
winny_addams PLATINUM, Menomonie, Wisconsin
47 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never judge a book you've never read!

I honestly don't know what to say. I really like this one too. You are truly one great artist.