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When I am dead, my dearest, don’t stick my bones
together with Scotch tape. Do not try to fit them
underneath a frame. Use them, one by one,
as a weapon, a gavel. My bones,
they can be good back scratchers, honey mixers,
and hands of clocks.

You can toss them across space
and see how far they’ll glide until another hand
slips across it. When I am dead, dearest,
thread my bones to the top of a mountain.

The next time you arrive at a glass sea,
spill it boldly. Spell your life in two parts,
watch them float until they descend
like a weight down into that container.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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optimisticpessimist said...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 11:03 am:
It's kinda dark and I love it! I 'd appreciate if you could look at my stuff thanks.
 
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KICK3593 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 11:16 pm:
Ooh, like Bradstreet!...
 
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moonpetal said...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 2:52 pm:
Wow that was cool! I love it!
 
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krisssss This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 9:27 pm:
Simply beautiful :)
 
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theswerve15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 1:08 pm:
this is very intreguing, i love it:) check out my piece, "fireflies" and vote for me, please, and i'll vote for you :)
 
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lovetowriteandwatchTV said...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 12:30 pm:

very intresting, it is good, i like the feeling of it

 

 
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tweety1ofakind said...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 7:45 pm:
omg !! this is so inspiring you must keep writing this will touch so many lives !!
 
L.T.A replied...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 11:13 am :
There's something odd about it but I like it
 
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Anne1 said...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 12:47 pm:

nice poem it mackes me think

 

 
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Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 6:33 pm:
wow, i've commented before but i have to do so again, this is really amazing and it's clear that you have talent, i love the symbolization, it's heartbreaking.
 
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akbird said...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 6:13 pm:
....hmmmm...I like it!!!
 
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BaiLiHua This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 5:03 pm:
Really marvelous and beautiful!
 
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evenlyodd said...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 9:53 am:
k. rlly lykked thiz poem- yew cn tell its not wht evry1 lykkes but way tew stayy true tew urself :) haha. good job!
 
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mpacheco15 said...
Jun. 6, 2010 at 7:58 pm:
Haters gonna hate, but really?
 
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CloneA This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 6:49 pm:
Excellent - such a confident voice here. I LOVE the variety in the description. I can really feel this poem.
 
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WriterDancerLover This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 29, 2010 at 4:28 pm:
Ignore any negativity that people send toward you. I really love this poem. It speaks with such a true voice, and it's so original and powerful.
 
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demetria said...
May 27, 2010 at 5:41 pm:
where were you taking this? what was the point? when you were writting did you have the reader in mind. this was very odd and had no clear concept. develop body more and concept more. this is a little creepy...no....REALLY CREEPY!
 
moonshoescarly replied...
May 29, 2010 at 1:46 pm :
Why are you so negative on everyone's poems? All these poems have a purpose; it's up to the reader to find it. Stop asking the author what the purpose is and read the poem because it's obvious!
 
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TUBBZ-6 said...
May 26, 2010 at 1:46 pm:

the poem was great but a little scary idk if it is supposed to be or if it is supposed to be romantic but it was still really good i think you would enjoy some of my writings once they finnaly go throw the fillter

TUBBZ-6

 

 

 
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Beth K. said...
May 20, 2010 at 5:52 pm:
This is a god message as to not use bones in an unwise way, but why would you even want someone to mess with your bones in the way you portray? It's kind of ridiculous.
 
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