When I am Dead This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

January 21, 2009
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When I am dead, my dearest, don’t stick my bones
together with Scotch tape. Do not try to fit them
underneath a frame. Use them, one by one,
as a weapon, a gavel. My bones,
they can be good back scratchers, honey mixers,
and hands of clocks.

You can toss them across space
and see how far they’ll glide until another hand
slips across it. When I am dead, dearest,
thread my bones to the top of a mountain.

The next time you arrive at a glass sea,
spill it boldly. Spell your life in two parts,
watch them float until they descend
like a weight down into that container.

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trueyolkThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 17 at 1:54 am
I loved the way you asked for the usage of the dead bones in such strange ways, very unique. I wonder if I were to oblige, would I mix honey with em?
 
Eric_XuThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 29, 2015 at 9:43 pm
Intriguing, morbid, and fascinating, all at the same time. Good job!
 
KatariOsborne said...
Nov. 5, 2015 at 8:37 am
Your poem attracts my attention in a way because I’m a person that deals with death all the time, at my family’s funeral home. I just loved the way you used, “Use them, one by one, as a weapon, a gavel. My bones, they can be good back scratchers, honey mixers, And hands of clocks,” to show imagery and simile about the hands on a clock and a good back scratcher. It gives me an idea of you as a author trying to show that don’t just bury me, use me to an advantage.
 
Skatergirl152 replied...
May 4, 2016 at 11:22 am
i love what you said it's so true
 
MADDO said...
Oct. 28, 2015 at 12:47 am
Its indeed beautiful poem... i loved it... good job !!!
 
Iamwhoiam16 said...
Mar. 19, 2015 at 6:22 am
I really love the way it was written! :) Great job! can you check out some of my poems,please
 
AprilNicole This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 19, 2014 at 6:20 pm
Nice...morbid, but also charming in a way.
 
Jocelin said...
Dec. 17, 2014 at 10:56 am
nice dude nice =D
 
WindRunner said...
Nov. 21, 2014 at 3:52 pm
A little scary. I know I dont want anyone useing my bones as back-scratchers!  
 
gaabbbeeee_ said...
Oct. 13, 2014 at 11:07 am
GOod job this is great!  
 
Theraforever said...
Jul. 11, 2014 at 3:39 pm
I love this! Its fun, yet serious and just what anyone wants to make of it. Overall its creative and oviously a peice formed by a creative and phenomanal writer. If you have any spare time I would cherish any peice of advice you could give me. Dont hesitate to email, Theraforever@gmail.com. - Thera
 
_Zavery_ said...
Apr. 21, 2014 at 9:12 pm
I read this poem over and over. Wow you are truly talented. Great piece!!
 
BrandalynBooth This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 3, 2013 at 12:50 pm
I really love this. Beautiful job
 
dina8 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 18, 2013 at 8:27 pm
Obsessed with this poem! Great job!
 
Readobsesion said...
Oct. 6, 2013 at 5:46 pm
I think this is a beautiful poem. It has a lot of feeling and heart. If all your work is like this then you are a very, very great writer.
 
love_writing said...
Aug. 7, 2013 at 11:06 am
This was really amazing!  I loved the eerie feel to it!
 
thezebrasgray This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 8, 2013 at 11:17 pm
That was gorgeous and dripping with originality. Spectacular!
 
ChobaniLuvinPenguin This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 31, 2012 at 5:13 pm
WOW!!!! I am truly speechless... That was amazing!!!! So beautiful! And the eerie tone made it more captivating and memorable! You are soooooo good! I'll be sure to check out more of your work!
 
ChobaniLuvinPenguin This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 31, 2012 at 5:13 pm
WOW!!!! I am truly speechless... That was amazing!!!! So beautiful! And the eerie tone made it more captivating and memorable! You are soooooo good! I'll be sure to check out more of your work!
 
Silence_ said...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 5:35 pm
That was Beautiful! :)
 
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