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i would reveal my vulnerability
and deploy emotion-satiated drops
down the contours of my face
just to feel your fingertips
whisper reassuring secrets
across my eager skin
as you blockade a stream of defenselessness
from flowing into
the corners of my lips

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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Fia-fia said...
Feb. 27, 2012 at 7:37 pm:

This is simply amazing!! So well written and thought out!! I recently got back with my ex, and this is the story of my life! Thank you soooo much and keep up the fantastic work!!

:)

 
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deathdragon1240 said...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 1:00 pm:
pervertation
 
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reblepThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 16, 2011 at 8:53 pm:
i can't even put into words how much i love this! awesome job. 
 
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megpie000 said...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 3:46 pm:
Jenny ur an amazing writer! im super jealous of how good u r!!!! :D
 
jenny replied...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 5:57 pm :
Ha Megan you shouldn't be at all I think you're really good too :]
 
megpie000 replied...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 6:15 pm :
i dont think im that good but ur like brilliant
 
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sydthesquid This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 5:06 pm:
Absolutely beautiful.
 
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TaylorMarieD said...
Dec. 10, 2009 at 8:31 pm:
I can't believe no one has commented on how brilliant this is. I love how brief it is, I think that increases the impact.
 
jenny replied...
Dec. 10, 2009 at 8:50 pm :
dude, you have no idea how much i appreciate that. thank you!! :]
 
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