Just to Feel You MAG

January 20, 2009
By Jenny Goldberger BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
Jenny Goldberger BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
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i would reveal my vulnerability
and deploy emotion-satiated drops
down the contours of my face
just to feel your fingertips
whisper reassuring secrets
across my eager skin
as you blockade a stream of defenselessness
from flowing into
the corners of my lips



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Fia-fia BRONZE said...
on Feb. 27 2012 at 7:37 pm
Fia-fia BRONZE, Bethesda, Maryland
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This is simply amazing!! So well written and thought out!! I recently got back with my ex, and this is the story of my life! Thank you soooo much and keep up the fantastic work!!

:)


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on Jan. 4 2012 at 1:00 pm
juggalohomie, Ocala, Florida
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i like faygo!!!!

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reblep GOLD said...
on May. 16 2011 at 8:53 pm
reblep GOLD, Chester, Connecticut
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the sun through my window, warming my skin...

i can't even put into words how much i love this! awesome job. 

on Jan. 9 2010 at 6:15 pm
megpie000 PLATINUM, Marietta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Give generously to him and do so without a grudging heart; then because of this the Lord you God will bless you in all your work and in everything you put your hand to." Deuteronomy 15:10

i dont think im that good but ur like brilliant

jenny said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 5:57 pm
Ha Megan you shouldn't be at all I think you're really good too :]

on Jan. 9 2010 at 3:46 pm
megpie000 PLATINUM, Marietta, Georgia
22 articles 1 photo 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Give generously to him and do so without a grudging heart; then because of this the Lord you God will bless you in all your work and in everything you put your hand to." Deuteronomy 15:10

Jenny ur an amazing writer! im super jealous of how good u r!!!! :D

on Dec. 16 2009 at 5:06 pm
foreverdreaming14 PLATINUM, Redmond, Washington
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Absolutely beautiful.

jenny said...
on Dec. 10 2009 at 8:50 pm
dude, you have no idea how much i appreciate that. thank you!! :]

on Dec. 10 2009 at 8:31 pm
TaylorMarieD SILVER, Columbia, South Carolina
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"The World is but a canvas to our imaginations."-Henry David Thoreau

I can't believe no one has commented on how brilliant this is. I love how brief it is, I think that increases the impact.


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