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Attention

March 31, 2015
By KayRae GOLD, Arlington Hts, Illinois
KayRae GOLD, Arlington Hts, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
It is not the critic who counts; not the man who points out how the strong man stumbles, or where the doer of deeds could have done them better. The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena, whose face is marred by dust and sweat and blood; who strives valiantly; who errs, who comes short again and again, because there is no effort without error and shortcoming; but who does actually strive to do the deeds; who knows great enthusiasms, the great devotions; who spends himself in a worthy cause; who at the best knows in the end the triumph of high achievement, and who at the worst, if he fails, at least fails while daring greatly, so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat.


I could write a poem for you
but you would never hear it.
If I stretched out my shaking
hand, you
would never try to grasp it.
She bats her lashes
looking for immediate love
from someone thats no good,
because her heart is weak
from lack of a fathers love.
He stumbles outside of his
birth parents house.
His face seems to embrace
all the pain of them leaving.
Even though they have never
spoken a word.
She steers the car with
excitement on her face,
“Dad someone asked me to prom!”
“Really? Who would want
to touch you?”
She hides the tears caused by
his undefined hatred with just
one swipe of a wrist.
They will never stop looking
under rocks for the love they
never had.
Just to find the insects of this
earth
the ones that just want your blood
the ones that will never fill
the hole carved in your
seemingly hollow chest.


The author's comments:

Inspired by my father. 


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Embrace22 GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2016 at 2:24 pm
Embrace22 GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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I believe you are very talented and keep expressing it never stop .