My innocence

April 2, 2015
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GIRL: in everything that we been through all the love i gave to you, how come i can still smile when i'm with you,

our past is the past those days will never last; i just wanna know the truth.

do you love me like i love you?

GIRL: i tried to forgive you for all thatwe been through, but the lies you tell i see no truth,

i'll ask you again..'DO YOU LOVE ME LIKE I LOVE YOU"?

BOY: show me baby girl, tell daddy the truth,

i told you i'll always be here for you,

just lay down so i can take care of you, i won't hurt you girl i love!

GIRL: please don't...don't im not ready

BOY: you're not ready to be my girl, i guess you not ready to be my world,

if i can't touch you then who can,

if your not my woman then who's your man

ME: "SOME THINGS THE WORLD JUST DON'T UNDERSTAND"

DON'T TAKE IT FROM ME BECAUSE THAT DOESN'T MAKE YOU A MAN!!!!






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BeilaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 8, 2015 at 1:19 am
I love the bounce in your poetry and the strong voice that shines through. I can definitely hear this as spoken word, maybe even rap? ;) The way the tone buids in this piece is so powerful! By the way, I tried to post this on "Queen Bee," and it didn't work: That stanza-- yellow and black or black and yellow doesn't make a difference because im still in this hell hole-- love it!
 
passion_poet19 replied...
Apr. 8, 2015 at 9:57 am
thank you and it did so up on my queen bee one i just read it lol. its o.k tho.
 
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