My innocence

April 2, 2015
By passion_poet19 GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
passion_poet19 GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Someday i would stop wondering where i went wrong and know where i went right"


GIRL: in everything that we been through all the love i gave to you, how come i can still smile when i'm with you,

our past is the past those days will never last; i just wanna know the truth.

do you love me like i love you?

GIRL: i tried to forgive you for all thatwe been through, but the lies you tell i see no truth,

i'll ask you again..'DO YOU LOVE ME LIKE I LOVE YOU"?

BOY: show me baby girl, tell daddy the truth,

i told you i'll always be here for you,

just lay down so i can take care of you, i won't hurt you girl i love!

GIRL: please don't...don't im not ready

BOY: you're not ready to be my girl, i guess you not ready to be my world,

if i can't touch you then who can,

if your not my woman then who's your man

ME: "SOME THINGS THE WORLD JUST DON'T UNDERSTAND"

DON'T TAKE IT FROM ME BECAUSE THAT DOESN'T MAKE YOU A MAN!!!!


The author's comments:

some boys just want to have sex with girls or force it but im not having it and it will never happen again, either you love me for me or don't love me at all.


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on Apr. 8 2015 at 9:57 am
passion_poet19 GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
12 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Someday i would stop wondering where i went wrong and know where i went right"

thank you and it did so up on my queen bee one i just read it lol. its o.k tho.

Beila BRONZE said...
on Apr. 8 2015 at 1:19 am
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco." -Mark Twain

I love the bounce in your poetry and the strong voice that shines through. I can definitely hear this as spoken word, maybe even rap? ;) The way the tone buids in this piece is so powerful! By the way, I tried to post this on "Queen Bee," and it didn't work: That stanza-- yellow and black or black and yellow doesn't make a difference because im still in this hell hole-- love it!


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