Don't lie but be... | Teen Ink

Don't lie but be...

March 25, 2015
By Jossy GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
Jossy GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
11 articles 5 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
is That to never give up and always tray your best


Don't tell someone you love them unless you do.

Don't tell someone you miss them uless you do.

Don't tell someone you will be their for 100% unless you will be their.

Don't tell someone you hate t5hem if you really don't.

Don't tel someone thy your #1 when their your #2.

Don't make someone your second plate when they want to be the first.

Don't make someoe suffer unless you have known what suffering is.

Don't hurt someone because you are very hurt.

Don't hurt yourself becaue it is nt worth it

Don't give others the power of winning because your suffering becuase of them.

Don't die on your last days but live better

Don't kill someone because someone kiled you with no lov on hate and no one to be there for you when you need someone.

What we all nedd to do is be love, but not hated.

Have ta person that is there for you 100% not 50%.

What we all need to do is o suffer but not die, to not hurt yourself and stay strong.

What we all need to do is to be that first plate and the #1, and to be that person helps everyone else but also needs help and gets it.

Just STAY STRONG people ca hear you if you want to or not.   



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


Jossy GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2015 at 8:00 pm
Jossy GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
11 articles 5 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
is That to never give up and always tray your best

Ok thanks! And yea its the typing fast @lilylovesmusic

on Mar. 27 2015 at 9:25 pm
Lilylovesmusic BRONZE, Placentia, California
4 articles 0 photos 7 comments
Good job but some of the spelling is off. In stanzas 3 and 5 you said their when it should have been they're. Other than that just some silly typos that are probably from typing too fast. Sorry for criticizing, but I feel spelling helps the reader visualize the speaker.