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Mind Caution
February 27, 2015
Her name is no harmony
Hear her blessed blessing
No symphany
Seeing what can not be seen by the eye
The eyes of others
Shy is her serenity
For not to come lately does he
Simple a task
Too good to last
A common plea
Resentless sanity to comfort her
Though to be certain
There is no certainy
Clearly no mono is in radious
She is hesitant to vouch her last chance at truth
She sees no more
Lost
Helpless
Stripes blur her vision
Satin ribons of deep red cascade
Hope
Is no longer in her agenda
Yet so close
© Jessica F., Bradford, MA
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She.is.her SILVER said...
on Mar. 3 2015 at 6:54 pm
Thank you, that really means a lot. I have never actually shown my poetry to people anf i am thrilled that you and everyone else appreciate it.
kikixkupkake GOLD said...
on Mar. 3 2015 at 8:39 am
I adore the way you personified peace but kept it mysterious enough for it to not be overwhelming. Also, your language in this poem is very poise and professional sounding yet still casual enough to maintain interest of the reader. Good work!
In this piece I clear up how one might describe lost hope, faith, or cause. "She" is caught up so much so in her own devistation that it becomes over powering and she looses self control. She "pleas" for peace but feels like no one is listening, especially peace himself. She doesnt know how to help herself and in the end she resorts to the worst but she is vaugely aware of how near closure is. Now is your time to reach out for closure.