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The Letter of Bullets

February 24, 2015
By AmberGarrioneFFAGIRL BRONZE, Salina, Kansas
AmberGarrioneFFAGIRL BRONZE, Salina, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
if you can beat the fight then join the war.


"mwen vle mouri" was written on the paper left for a reader.

Walking out, breathing deeply.

Alone, tears fall as the mind has been set.

A pistol in hand, loaded, ready to go, "mwen renmen ou" was wispered softly.

'POP' the sound was loud.

body falling to the ground slowly, the gun empty, a shell flys.

the sidewalk stained.

the grass soaking.

the evidence unbarable to the naked eye.

the note was found with no reason of why.

understanding what happened, tears fall.

sorrow bled thru the fake smile for so long, but very few saw.  


The author's comments:

i am not the adverage teen. my writing comes from truth and it may be disturbing. many teens go thru suicide and i want them to understand that mabye there situation isnt as bad as some i know. i apologize if my writing affends any one. and i send my condolences to those who have lost from suicide. 


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on Feb. 27 2015 at 11:56 pm
DragonWriter11 GOLD, Johnston, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"The only person in this world who can write your life story is you. Don't hand the pen over to someone else just because they made one chapter miserable."

Wow....nice job making the message powerful. I totally agree with you, suicide isn't a good option.