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The Empty Streets MAG

January 7, 2009
By Anonymous

I watched the traffic lights change
from green to yellow to red,
from behind my steering wheel,
from the other side of the glass.
And I drove the empty streets
that reminded me so much of
the empty hallways of your heart;
I guess I knew you weren’t coming back.
So I circled the block once more
hoping maybe we would pass
and I nearly thought we did,
but those weren’t your headlights
that I was staring at.
The slow and steady pulsing
of the biggest small town,
cars passing through lights
like my blood through valves;
missing you is like background noise,
like traffic outside my window at night.
And when I press my head to your chest
to hear the slow and steady pulsing
of your blood circling the block again,
the stars spread out before me
like city lights from atop a hill.



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on Jan. 10 2010 at 5:39 pm
the_Horsegirl SILVER, Minneapolis, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
People need dreams, there's as much nourishment in 'em as food.
--Dorothy Gilman

If there is such a thing as truth, it is as intricate and hidden as a crown of feathers.
--Isaac Bashevis Singer

This is a lovely poem. Your words flow together so fluidly. You have a really strong voice.

on Jan. 6 2010 at 11:11 am
soinlove SILVER, Parish, New York
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this is so good i thought about diffrent things while i read it i like it alot

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on Nov. 25 2009 at 9:59 pm
Kagome BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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that was really great i wish i had that much creativity

Cady_ PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 25 2009 at 3:24 pm
Cady_ PLATINUM, Godley, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover.", and "When you judge another, you do not define them, you define yourself." "Cherish your life." "Love equals eternity."

Im speechless>>>i loved it.... FIVE STARS!!! WRITE MORE POEMS!!!

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:50 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

I love it. I like the idea of there being empty hallways in someones heart.

-Blessed Be!

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on Nov. 4 2009 at 2:58 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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Great meaning and insight. I loved it.

Beautiful poem darling=]

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MissRiss said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 8:34 pm
MissRiss, Grafton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Anyone can be passionate, but it takes real lovers to be silly" - Rose Franken

very beautiful

on Sep. 29 2009 at 2:22 pm
I like the way you described the way your heart was empty just like the hallways. You really caught my attention by the picture you posted!!! it was very interesting!!

on Sep. 29 2009 at 11:54 am
That was an amazing story i read that 1 time and i liked.

lilducky said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 8:06 am
hey nice comment but its not really good enough

on Jul. 24 2009 at 7:04 am
lost_in_my_sea_of_dreams BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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its absolutely brilliant

on Jun. 5 2009 at 7:14 pm
LaShaeKnight BRONZE, Bham, Alabama
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i luv this poem

Ryan M. said...
on May. 29 2009 at 7:33 pm
this is amazing

on May. 29 2009 at 4:00 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This is beautiful. I love it..

Please check out my work if you have time. Rate, read, comment if you so choose. Thank you!

on May. 29 2009 at 3:08 pm
Da_Lengend! BRONZE, McClellamville, South Carolina
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This is really good!!!

=))

on May. 29 2009 at 5:54 am
afifa mehmood, Multan, Other
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a good poem!

on May. 17 2009 at 9:52 pm
Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"You dont know what you have until its gone"

it's awesome. I really enjoyed reading it. So ... sweet.

on May. 14 2009 at 1:20 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

It's ok. I like the beginning but it somewhat confuses me by the end.. are they still together and she's just not with him, or are they not with each other at all and she's missing him? I love the wording and the comparison of her heart and the life around her. Makes it more- realistic.

sportsman123 said...
on May. 6 2009 at 5:41 pm
very good poem

emma?buzz said...
on May. 5 2009 at 6:13 pm
really pretty :)