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The Lost World

November 8, 2014
By @nime.@ngel BRONZE, Chicopee, Massachusetts
@nime.@ngel BRONZE, Chicopee, Massachusetts
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This world; Such pallor
no color, no life
What has become of me
Of everything else?

It marvels me
fills me with wonders, worries
questions
of the future

I see myself,
in the cracked mirrors
on the ground
there are so many…

So many cracked, burned..
and broken…

is this real?
what is real?

i walk…
i walk on

They
They wander, without reason
without purpose
like ragged dolls
with their limbs dangling
their head without bones
to lift them

Some laugh,
crazily, insanely
as they walk

They laugh
They,those
that have lost their minds

I see myself
in them...
I have to wonder
Will I turn like them?
What will become of this world
And what will become of me?
as I walk it?


The author's comments:

This is about someone who has woken to a different world, with creatures that resemble humans, these things were once people but were consumed...


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on Dec. 3 2014 at 11:32 pm
@nime.@ngel BRONZE, Chicopee, Massachusetts
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thank you! xD i really tried hard to make it different and mystrious and that great if it easier to read, thank you again for reading, i really enjoy javing other read what i have to write

on Dec. 3 2014 at 9:07 am
MydnyghtMagyck BRONZE, South Jordan, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
“ If you hear a song that makes you cry and you don't want to cry anymore, you don't listen to that song anymore.
But you can't get away from yourself. You can't decide not to see yourself anymore. You can't decide to turn off the noise in your head.”
― Jay Asher, Thirteen Reasons Why

I really liked this.  Your word choice was cool, and the lines flowed well, making it easier to read.  It definetly kept me interested, and the title was a perfect choice.  :)