A Crest-Endorsed Snowfall MAG

December 26, 2008
By safiregiirl GOLD, Centerbrook, Connecticut
safiregiirl GOLD, Centerbrook, Connecticut
11 articles 3 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Wanting to be someone else is a waste of the person you are."
Kurt Cobain


When enveloped by the icy silence
Of echoed heartbeats
And soft snowfall,
My breathing comes in rasps
Of peppermint toothpaste,
A taste of pure delight.

When metal meets pavement
Coated with resilience,
And untainted white,
There comes the sound of grating
Of nails against chalkboard,
And Sky creeps toward Night.



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on Mar. 27 2015 at 6:57 am
SkywithDiamonds BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Living is easy with eyes closed/Misunderstanding all you see/It's getting hard to be someone but it all works out/It doesn't matter much to me"

--"Strawberry Fields Forever", The Beatles

I really love irregular rhyme schemes and this works great! Beautiful imagery too.

Kaitlyn said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 10:58 am
Actually, I'm not a man haha. Thank you :)

on Nov. 29 2011 at 9:02 am
mr.awesome15120 SILVER, Levering, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont get mad get even

that was really good man.

Free- GOLD said...
on May. 23 2011 at 5:25 pm
Free- GOLD, Blllll, Kentucky
14 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I believe in you and I believe in me, and I believe that we are not meaningless."
"What a waste of a perfectly good wrist."

Amazing, entrancing=my jealousy!

Evaine SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2010 at 8:26 am
Evaine SILVER, Schulkill Haven, Pennsylvania
8 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
live a freak, die a legend

this is great! and i really how u described the pavement to nails on a chalkboard.  that was what really brought out your idea of which one was your preference.

:D


on Feb. 16 2010 at 11:21 am
Oh my god! I loved it. When I read this I almost cried. So emotional and beautiful. Keep writing.

Grace09 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2009 at 4:21 pm
Grace09 BRONZE, Colorado City, Colorado
3 articles 2 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have a heart of gold, but so does a hard boiled egg." By: I can't remember.

Woah! Thats all I can say.

on Nov. 11 2009 at 7:12 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

THIS WAS REALLY GOOOD!!! O.O

on Sep. 27 2009 at 7:48 am
romance_lover GOLD, Edmonton, Other
12 articles 0 photos 28 comments
Your writing is absolutely amazing and left me speechless. Youve got this far so dont give up stay positine and please please keep writing




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