A Crest-Endorsed Snowfall This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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When enveloped by the icy silence
Of echoed heartbeats
And soft snowfall,
My breathing comes in rasps
Of peppermint toothpaste,
A taste of pure delight.

When metal meets pavement
Coated with resilience,
And untainted white,
There comes the sound of grating
Of nails against chalkboard,
And Sky creeps toward Night.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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SkywithDiamonds said...
Mar. 27, 2015 at 6:57 am
I really love irregular rhyme schemes and this works great! Beautiful imagery too.
 
mr.awesome15120 said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 9:02 am
that was really good man.
 
Kaitlyn replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 10:58 am
Actually, I'm not a man haha. Thank you :)
 
Free- said...
May 23, 2011 at 5:25 pm
Amazing, entrancing=my jealousy!
 
Evaine said...
Dec. 12, 2010 at 8:26 am

this is great! and i really how u described the pavement to nails on a chalkboard.  that was what really brought out your idea of which one was your preference.

:D

 
angel of music said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 11:21 am
Oh my god! I loved it. When I read this I almost cried. So emotional and beautiful. Keep writing.
 
Grace09 said...
Nov. 29, 2009 at 4:21 pm
Woah! Thats all I can say.
 
~*el-oh-vee-ee*~ said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 7:12 pm
THIS WAS REALLY GOOOD!!! O.O
 
romance_lover This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 7:48 am
Your writing is absolutely amazing and left me speechless. Youve got this far so dont give up stay positine and please please keep writing
 
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