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Permanent Darkness

October 14, 2014
By dis3nchant3d PLATINUM, Congers, New York
dis3nchant3d PLATINUM, Congers, New York
21 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Kids that wear black and listen to rock music aren't all satan worshippers or terrible people."
- Andy Biersack


Permanent Darkness

I'm in a dark pit, a dark, dark pit
And I'm trapped.
Nowhere to go. Nowhere to hide.
No one to go to
because they wouldn't understand.
I hear voices, voices surround me
But it's only me
Screaming without making a sound
Do you hear me?
You can't. I'm screaming
No one's left to hear me
Sinking deeper, deeper
Into this pit of darkness
Where no one wants to be
With no one left to help me
 



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on Oct. 20 2014 at 1:39 pm
dis3nchant3d PLATINUM, Congers, New York
21 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Kids that wear black and listen to rock music aren't all satan worshippers or terrible people."
- Andy Biersack

Ahh some typos in there, sorry 

on Oct. 20 2014 at 1:38 pm
dis3nchant3d PLATINUM, Congers, New York
21 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Kids that wear black and listen to rock music aren't all satan worshippers or terrible people."
- Andy Biersack

Thanks so much swimmergirl! I honestly just sit down at write what I'm feeling, like when I wrote this, I was having a bad day. My poetry is like my real story, instead of what people see. I really appreciate your frredback, I'll post more soon!

on Oct. 20 2014 at 1:36 pm
dis3nchant3d PLATINUM, Congers, New York
21 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Kids that wear black and listen to rock music aren't all satan worshippers or terrible people."
- Andy Biersack

Thank you :) 

KIMMYAAMEE said...
on Oct. 16 2014 at 7:57 pm
KIMMYAAMEE, Pontiac, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
I can see the flower upon which my life grows, blooming into a rose.

See the hope and courage in the strength of the petals.
As long as I am, I will be.
The flower will never wilt or die.
As my life grows back, I shall become strong.
I shall become

I love it.

on Oct. 15 2014 at 9:47 pm
Swimmergirl101 GOLD, Rolla, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Be Happy. It's one way of being wise" - Collette

Wow this is powerful. Amazing job. I was blown away!!!!! Keep up the good work.