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Beauty is the Beast MAG

By Anonymous

Her skin, butter-cream by day, turns translucent by night.
Her hair, ebony black, shimmers like the night sky
But only to deceive those she encounters
Her lips, stained crimson from her victims
Eyes piercing blue, penetrating those who make contact with them
Her corpse, deemed immaculate by those she lures into her trap
She is the deceiver, the harlot of the hills
But cleverly disguised
The mark of the beast lies in her hands



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on Jul. 4 2010 at 3:26 am
Jailei88 PLATINUM, Van Buren, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
What makes us different, makes us beautiful...

I like your view. Quite interesting.

on Jul. 1 2010 at 3:52 pm
Jellybean9898 PLATINUM, Glendale, California
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Favorite Quote:
"When nothing goes right, go left"-Anonymous
"Thank God men cannot fly, and lay waste to the sky as well as the Earth"-Henry David Thoreau

i love your vision with this, and how greatly you give meaning to the words.  great work!

on Jun. 29 2010 at 6:16 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

wow thats really pretty . great work . please check my work :)

dude123 said...
on Jun. 29 2010 at 10:51 am
maybe there is some clinche but i do have to say that i dis agree with you about it! i think it is good, and maybe a bit figurative it is not really a women it is a sign

on Jun. 27 2010 at 7:48 pm
LavenderWaves, Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Life is full of beauty. Notice it. Notice the bumble bee, the small child and the smiling faces. Smell the rain and feel the wind. Live your life to the fullest potential and fight for your dreams ~ Ashley Smith

Wow, this is very good. Great job

on Jun. 23 2010 at 7:08 pm
mysterywriter11 GOLD, Dickson, Tennessee
11 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
Reach for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. ♥ ♫♪♫♪♫♪
"believe in your dreams, no matter how small or big they are, you might just be surprised... "

I like this poem a lot! You put yourself into your work and i can tell. i would love to hear what your book is about. and i noticed you were from missouri kansas city. my mom and i used to live there... wow! talk about a small world. :)

on Jun. 20 2010 at 7:40 pm
tweety1ofakind BRONZE, Magnolia, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
\" You Must Be The Change That You Want To See \"

too beautiful for words !! it touched a tender spot !!

on Jun. 10 2010 at 4:49 pm
blacknsexy360 SILVER, Glendale, Arizona
9 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"YOU CANT SUCCEED IF YOU DNT TRY"

I LIKE THE COMPLEXITY!!AND THE FIGURATIVE LANG U KEEP WRITING!!!

on Jun. 7 2010 at 10:00 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Too beautiful for words! It sounds like a short story, but in a small amount of lines. I love it! :)

on Jun. 7 2010 at 9:56 pm
This is so inspirational! I love it!

on Jun. 7 2010 at 9:55 pm
Love is so bitter. But the after-taste is the sweetest thing in the world!

on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:22 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

Wow! Amazing! By the looks of this it seems you could write amazing short stories too. Keep Writing!

coly33 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 4:40 pm
coly33 BRONZE, Lyndhurst, New Jersey
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awesome loved it exactly true (sorta) ok not at all but the way it feels it istrue in your mind i mean but still amazing

:)


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on Jun. 7 2010 at 2:54 pm
Chimzzy BRONZE, Winnipeg, Other
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Amazing Job ! (:

katie-cat GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 6:14 am
katie-cat GOLD, McClellandtown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Look after my heart, I've left it with you."- Edward Cullen
"To love another person is to see the face of God . . ."- Les Miserables
"Don't say the old lady screamed. Bring her out and let her scream." - Mark Twain

I really liked this poem.  It was deep and mysterious, the descriptions were superb! Great job :)

Snow_White said...
on May. 31 2010 at 1:45 am
I loved it! :)

on May. 30 2010 at 7:17 pm
KelleySchorn SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Whatever you are be a good one-some president i dont remember which
procrastinaters unite!...tomorrow!!-matt
i'm F-U-L-LLLLL i think i can spellllll-allie =]

wow very good i like it!

 

*if anyone reads this will you please check out and comment on my work? thanks :)


on May. 26 2010 at 9:28 am
swimmergirl4497 BRONZE, Clarkston, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
REALLY?

LOVE THE BIG WORDS! SOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!

on May. 26 2010 at 9:26 am
swimmergirl4497 BRONZE, Clarkston, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
REALLY?

awesome poem! love the detail, u rock!

cheetoz said...
on May. 25 2010 at 1:18 pm
cheetoz, Bpt, Connecticut
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hey it me...i really like this poem nd ur really good!