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Him.....

September 12, 2014
By Artemis.Roe PLATINUM, Marysville, Michigan
Artemis.Roe PLATINUM, Marysville, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Well-behaved women seldom make history" ---Eleanor Roosevelt
"A man of words and not deeds is like a garden full of weeds." ~~Anonymous


There she stood,

Alone within the midst of many,

her golden heart,

darkened and broken,

all by him.

He was perfect,

or so he seemed,

she felt loved,

but it was only that,

an illusion.

he seemed to be her prince,

she felt like she could be with him forever,

she thought she would be,

because the mask he sported,

showed her love,

but she should’ve seen the small signs,

the little things he did,

even though she didn’t like it,

he wouldn’t listen,

he covered her mouth with his hand,

put his hand around her neck jokingly,

forced her to kiss him that first time…

she never thought twice about it,

until that day,

he pushed her too far,

she refused,

and tried to get away,

and try as she might,

she escaped,

but couldn’t stay away

he hurt her,

she cried,

and now,

she’s paying for her mistake…

with the promise of a child.


The author's comments:

This piece is from my heart its mostly about my expirience with an ex, it is mostly true except for the ending. i just for the longest time couldnt write this all down, but here it is. 


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on Sep. 18 2014 at 7:01 am
Artemis.Roe PLATINUM, Marysville, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Well-behaved women seldom make history" ---Eleanor Roosevelt
"A man of words and not deeds is like a garden full of weeds." ~~Anonymous

thanks, im glad you liked it :)  

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on Sep. 17 2014 at 6:37 pm
LovePerson, Modesto, California
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I may be small but I am the Boss

Wow THAT WAS AMAZING ITS REALLY NICE AND CALM WITH A PINCH OF LOVE... JUST-JUST PERFECT.

on Sep. 17 2014 at 4:23 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Wow. This is absolutely beautiful. It's wonderful. You put yourself into it, when you wrote it. Your poem is filled with you, raw/honest emotion, and just all in all, really beautiful. It's amazing. Yet at the sad time, it's sad. Thank you, thank you so much for sharing this. I love it. You have such a talent and greatness in you; you are a wonderful and talented person, and I hope you know that. Thank you again! Congrats on having it voted! ^_^ Thanks again!

on Sep. 17 2014 at 8:03 am
Artemis.Roe PLATINUM, Marysville, Michigan
43 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Well-behaved women seldom make history" ---Eleanor Roosevelt
"A man of words and not deeds is like a garden full of weeds." ~~Anonymous

Thanks, I didnt realize it kind of is like the song, thanks for commenting :)

on Sep. 16 2014 at 5:12 pm
beAWESOMEstayAWESOME BRONZE, New York City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Work hard in silence and let your accomplishments make the noise."

it remind me of the song i knew you were trouble by taylor swift. i like it. keep up the good work.