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So Right

It just feels so right.
But I know its not.
Or do I?

My heart has found its place,
But my mind questions.
Why do I feel this way?
Why do you treat me so?

I am richer than a queen,
With this love you’ve shown to me.

But I’m scared,
I don’t know this feeling.
I’ve never felt this numbness before.

Are you true?
Are you really there?
Have I met someone,
Who knows how to love,
Who really does care?

Love takes over my body,
And shuts down my brain.
All of my doubts and fears drain.

It just feels so right,
I want to believe,
You are true and right for me.



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Nelly_NellThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 16 at 11:39 pm:
Oh my gosh Janelle this poem is absoultly amazing and touching because i have felt this way before great job keep writting becasue you really good at it. :)  
 
Nella.Girl97This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
today at 4:17 pm :
aw thank you so much! that means so much to me!
 
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