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June 22, 2014
By bella-nielsen GOLD, Marshall, Minnesota
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bella-nielsen GOLD, Marshall, Minnesota
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"autism isn't contagious, but a smile is and that's what im afraid of."-grumpy cat

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as I wait
I think you can all relate
for that text
from that special someone

I lie awake
on my bed
my breath shaky
my phone sings

I snatch it up
then I cry
there is one line
'this is goodbye'

© Rebecca B., Marietta, GA

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EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 12 2014 at 1:01 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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Short it may be, but it's still powerful. :( this is so bittersweet yet so outstanding like you are! keep on, I'm cheering for you! thanks for sharing this!
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 30 2014 at 10:29 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
53 articles 40 photos 204 comments

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Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack
Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn
You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

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I like how much u said in just a few short lines that told a whole story
TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 30 2014 at 1:17 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

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"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

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I have to say, short poem but surely says it all. It has a deep sense and i loved it ^_^ Great Job
TevyRae PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 27 2014 at 9:23 pm
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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"Here is a small fact: You are going to die." ~The Book Thief
"You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self." ~Mikey Pasterik

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awe, it's so short, yet brings tears to my eyes. i've had something similar happen to me and that makes this poem very relateable and personal. aweswome job. i love the flow and the rhyme.
Popcornjazz SILVER said...
on Jun. 25 2014 at 1:19 pm
Popcornjazz SILVER, Gahana, Ohio
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Live life while you can

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Wow in those few verses little said and it was extraordinary