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Dancing alone revised

June 12, 2014
By TheUnkownLightInTheDarkness SILVER, St Johns, Michigan
TheUnkownLightInTheDarkness SILVER, St Johns, Michigan
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A dance you dance alone is not good for your soul,it leaves an empty void behind,an unforgiving hole.

For a dance you dance alone is isolation at it's best,it tears your spirit inside out,it puts youto the test.

A dance you dance alone can break the bravest mind,for isolation is the key to evil,and leaves a tail of destruction behind.

For everyone needs someone else for a guiding light,and for those who dance alone,death seems only right.

for hope is like a four leaf clover only few to be found,for when the music slowly fades to nothing,you slowly dread the sound.



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MeganLF GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2014 at 4:49 pm
MeganLF GOLD, Dundurn, Other
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Favorite Quote:
A writer’s brain is full of little gifts, like a piñata at a birthday party. It’s also full of demons, like a piñata at a birthday party in a mental hospital.

I loved this poem! The imagery was very vivid, and the lines flowed together virtually seamlessly. Great job, I got a lot of meaning from this piece of writing.

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 14 2014 at 10:42 am
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson

This is really good, I like it. The only thing that would make it better, I would suggest breaking up the lines a bit so we can see more easily where the breaks are. I personally, like reading shorter lines.